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Yeesh the time flies waaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy to fast. Now I'm going to be 21 on the 12th (sorry I'm staying sober on that day. Heh... Mom would kill me if I took a swig of my dad's beer pack.) Besides, I have to prepare for Otakon tomorrow (Who's going?) I'm planning on selling two pictures of Sora from kingdom hearts and a picture of Pokémon. I don't know how well they will sell but I hope people will bid on them. I was hoping to create another picture but I'm too busy, a couple of my college gal pals are coming with me to otakon.
Hope to see you there.
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Opinions on Rebooting of Voiceless Diva
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So, yea, while I am currently writing my Young Justice story, I've also been thinking of rewriting my Rockman Exe story, Voiceless diva. Now about this, Adeline and her navi, Diana are going to go through major changes in this reboot.
Originally Addy was supposed to have no feelings except for fear and would regain her emotions throughout the story (No duh, yes I will point this out since you pretty much know that Addy is the title character.) Along with this, Diana or as we affectionately call her, Dizzy, starts out as a child navi and is later on reconfigured into a teenager navi. Now, I recently went back through my stories and just found these two rather childish and not having strong characters (Addy making noising for communication when really she's supposed to be MUTE.)
In the reboot, Addy will be illustrated as completely mute, has blocked all her childhood memories and has no emotions what so ever (though her eye color still changes.) She will constantly be communicating through a sketchbook (not a bracelet. I find it rather hard for technology to pick up a person's thoughts.) She will still have the same traits as being a good fashion designer and a horrible cook and works a Maha Ichiban. As well, her relationship with Dingo will be built differently (I found it rather over the top with the whole betrothal crap. ) Dingo's reaction to meeting Addy starts off rather cold and shallow but soon he'll recognize her as the "the Girl in the vine covered Mansion" who saved him when they were children. Dingo joins Addy's adopted older brother, Netto and their friend, Jasmine in the mission to restore Addy's emotions and voice. He also makes his own personal mission to help Addy retrieve all of her childhood memories as he wants her to remember him. However, when his own navi is kidnapped and is held hostage, Dingo is forced to make a decision between restoring Addy's voice or saving Tomahawkman from Artemis, Dizzy's "evil" self.
As for Diana.exe, there won't be any changes to her child form or how she is developed (she is still Rockman's sister). However, there is a major change on how she is rebuilt into the teen version of herself. First I decided that instead of her transitioning into the true form, there will be two Dizzys that will built in the story and are supposed to merge together into one. The Child Dizzy or the Siren program is built by Dr. Yuchiro Hikari using the backup data of "the Voice" a.k.a Rockman's Mommy program and the late Taiyo, who is Rockman's father program. Both she and her brother take on the appearance of Taiyo. The Shell Diana or "Artemis" is the Reverse program was built by Addy's late father, Yuchiro's twin brother and Taiyo's best friend and net-op, Dr. Riku Hikari.
Artemis is pretty much serves as the anti-hero of the voiceless Diva. Having being built with the same mother and father programs, she was supposed to have a heart like any other navi. However due to the death of her creator, she was left without one- regardless is unable to feel any happiness or joy (what the child Dizzy represents). Artemis feels rather betrayed and strikes up a deal with Slur who offers a chance to gain a heart in exchange for the lives of the Diva and her family. Dingo's navi, Tomahawkman also plays a major role in this as his relationship with Artemis is also grown. Artemis kidnaps Tomahawkman and holds him and Addy's navi nursemaid, Serenade, for ransom in exchange for the Diva and the remaining Hikari Clan. Tomahawkman however, questions his captor's motives. He begins to show her how a heartless navi can feel the joys of life. Thus they gain feelings for each other. A wounded Artemis later on merges with the fragments of the Child Dizzy and becomes the new Diana, having both the Siren and Reverse forms.
So tell me what you think.
Originally Addy was supposed to have no feelings except for fear and would regain her emotions throughout the story (No duh, yes I will point this out since you pretty much know that Addy is the title character.) Along with this, Diana or as we affectionately call her, Dizzy, starts out as a child navi and is later on reconfigured into a teenager navi. Now, I recently went back through my stories and just found these two rather childish and not having strong characters (Addy making noising for communication when really she's supposed to be MUTE.)
In the reboot, Addy will be illustrated as completely mute, has blocked all her childhood memories and has no emotions what so ever (though her eye color still changes.) She will constantly be communicating through a sketchbook (not a bracelet. I find it rather hard for technology to pick up a person's thoughts.) She will still have the same traits as being a good fashion designer and a horrible cook and works a Maha Ichiban. As well, her relationship with Dingo will be built differently (I found it rather over the top with the whole betrothal crap. ) Dingo's reaction to meeting Addy starts off rather cold and shallow but soon he'll recognize her as the "the Girl in the vine covered Mansion" who saved him when they were children. Dingo joins Addy's adopted older brother, Netto and their friend, Jasmine in the mission to restore Addy's emotions and voice. He also makes his own personal mission to help Addy retrieve all of her childhood memories as he wants her to remember him. However, when his own navi is kidnapped and is held hostage, Dingo is forced to make a decision between restoring Addy's voice or saving Tomahawkman from Artemis, Dizzy's "evil" self.
As for Diana.exe, there won't be any changes to her child form or how she is developed (she is still Rockman's sister). However, there is a major change on how she is rebuilt into the teen version of herself. First I decided that instead of her transitioning into the true form, there will be two Dizzys that will built in the story and are supposed to merge together into one. The Child Dizzy or the Siren program is built by Dr. Yuchiro Hikari using the backup data of "the Voice" a.k.a Rockman's Mommy program and the late Taiyo, who is Rockman's father program. Both she and her brother take on the appearance of Taiyo. The Shell Diana or "Artemis" is the Reverse program was built by Addy's late father, Yuchiro's twin brother and Taiyo's best friend and net-op, Dr. Riku Hikari.
Artemis is pretty much serves as the anti-hero of the voiceless Diva. Having being built with the same mother and father programs, she was supposed to have a heart like any other navi. However due to the death of her creator, she was left without one- regardless is unable to feel any happiness or joy (what the child Dizzy represents). Artemis feels rather betrayed and strikes up a deal with Slur who offers a chance to gain a heart in exchange for the lives of the Diva and her family. Dingo's navi, Tomahawkman also plays a major role in this as his relationship with Artemis is also grown. Artemis kidnaps Tomahawkman and holds him and Addy's navi nursemaid, Serenade, for ransom in exchange for the Diva and the remaining Hikari Clan. Tomahawkman however, questions his captor's motives. He begins to show her how a heartless navi can feel the joys of life. Thus they gain feelings for each other. A wounded Artemis later on merges with the fragments of the Child Dizzy and becomes the new Diana, having both the Siren and Reverse forms.
So tell me what you think.
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YAY! I'm almost done with Finals! X3
Sorry If I haven't been around. School is so annoying and I am constantly redoing pictures that I keep on messing up. You know college.
I am also going back to college in a week for summer school. :C Remember last year when I failed second semester with Graphic design minor? Yea. I need to catch up in order to graduate in two years. I really hate that.
I'm a little bit sad that I found out last week that WB rejected the idea of reviving Young Justice and Green Lantern. The said because SMGO was suspicious and could be a fraud that wants our money. I mean fans waited for at least four weeks plus until we got word of the rejection. I mean there's not even any evidence to back up pf why they decided to reject it. Sorry to all teen titans fans though, I'm still not comfortable with the TTGO show. I mean they changed all the character personas and... well... I'm used to the old teen titans fighting crime FOR REAL.
And don't get me started on the new Batman CGI show. SERIOUSLY ANOTHER BATMAN SHOW? DC NATION WE ALREADY HAD THE BRAVE AND THE BOLD, COME ON! GIVE US A SHOW THAT WE CAN REALLY BE EXCITED ABOUT? LIKE BATGIRL, FLASH FAMILY, WONDER WOMAN, NIGHTWING, OR HELL EVEN BLACK LIGHTNING IS AWESOME! I MEAN DID YOU SEE HIS SHORT? I SO WANT TO SEE MORE OF THUNDER AND LIGHTNING!
Out of every other hero in DC, it just has to be batman. Yes we know batman is badass because he can fight without any powers. But seriously, out of every other hero, he has had at least six animated shows, three movies, and a bunch of comic books. I mean Cartoon network is giving us an overkill of the same old same old which is really really lame. not to mention they want to reboot old shows. Cartoon network. Those shows...were around when I was six. I'm nearly twenty one. Not to mention why you no listen to your other fans?
I'm starting to get the hint that children's TV shows for adolescence is that they are trying to keep the violence shows to a minimum because media is one of the things that effect children. However, the whole slapstick comedy truly is an over kill. I mean You've seen spongebob, you've seen them all.
Sorry... I just need to get this out of my system. But in a month I'll be free so expect some pictures.
Sorry If I haven't been around. School is so annoying and I am constantly redoing pictures that I keep on messing up. You know college.
I am also going back to college in a week for summer school. :C Remember last year when I failed second semester with Graphic design minor? Yea. I need to catch up in order to graduate in two years. I really hate that.
I'm a little bit sad that I found out last week that WB rejected the idea of reviving Young Justice and Green Lantern. The said because SMGO was suspicious and could be a fraud that wants our money. I mean fans waited for at least four weeks plus until we got word of the rejection. I mean there's not even any evidence to back up pf why they decided to reject it. Sorry to all teen titans fans though, I'm still not comfortable with the TTGO show. I mean they changed all the character personas and... well... I'm used to the old teen titans fighting crime FOR REAL.
And don't get me started on the new Batman CGI show. SERIOUSLY ANOTHER BATMAN SHOW? DC NATION WE ALREADY HAD THE BRAVE AND THE BOLD, COME ON! GIVE US A SHOW THAT WE CAN REALLY BE EXCITED ABOUT? LIKE BATGIRL, FLASH FAMILY, WONDER WOMAN, NIGHTWING, OR HELL EVEN BLACK LIGHTNING IS AWESOME! I MEAN DID YOU SEE HIS SHORT? I SO WANT TO SEE MORE OF THUNDER AND LIGHTNING!
Out of every other hero in DC, it just has to be batman. Yes we know batman is badass because he can fight without any powers. But seriously, out of every other hero, he has had at least six animated shows, three movies, and a bunch of comic books. I mean Cartoon network is giving us an overkill of the same old same old which is really really lame. not to mention they want to reboot old shows. Cartoon network. Those shows...were around when I was six. I'm nearly twenty one. Not to mention why you no listen to your other fans?
I'm starting to get the hint that children's TV shows for adolescence is that they are trying to keep the violence shows to a minimum because media is one of the things that effect children. However, the whole slapstick comedy truly is an over kill. I mean You've seen spongebob, you've seen them all.
Sorry... I just need to get this out of my system. But in a month I'll be free so expect some pictures.
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Okay... so I haven't submitted anything for the past two months. Yea.. blame classic school work, classes, procrastination and complete artist block. I'm still drawing but I am trying to improve my knowledge of anatomy (still sucks in drawing legs,feet and hands.) Though its only four classes this semester, I still have summer school to deal with which is an extra four to six weeks of four hours sitting in a classroom. Bleh.
Another thing I found out that the show I'm now into, Young Justice, is going to be canceled on DC nation. One of the very VERY few shows that I considered to be human as in it teaches morals and doesn't go over the top in the humor section (seriously exactly how many Sponge Bob bathroom humor shows are there these days?) Both YJ and GLTAS (Green Lantern the Animated series) are going to be replaced with a dumb reboot of Teen Titans (that looks nothing like the original. Seriously it looks like a DC nation short still.) and Batman the animated series (which sucks because 1# why the hell is Alfred running around with guns? 2# How many Batman shows has there been for the past decade? 3# Where the hell is Robin and Batgirl? And why is Katana in this? 4# Katana's design looks freak'n crappy compared to her Brave and the bold designs. 5#why the hell does Batman have triangular head? And 6# Where is the Joker? The Penguin? Poison Ivy? Why do we have villains with pig masks and frog faces?)
To be honest the whole entire idea of introducing new shows to DC nation is a terrible idea due the fact that all Teen Titan fans have grown up now and YJ and GLTAS are extremely popular. I doubt Cartoon network even cares for their fans. A college friend of mine who is also a huge YJ and GLTAS fan had told me that Cartoon Network is competing with the Hub channel due to the fact that the Hub aims for little girls and Cartoon Network is now aiming for boys. Whats really sad is how many dumb shows Cartoon Network shows such as Half Naked animals, Gumball (which disturbs me beyond all levels) and other shows that are noneducational to even boys. I remembered during Christmas, my nieces and nephews were watching Adventure Time and as soon as I saw Ice king strip down, I told them to turn it off. Seriously? Are they really promoting disturbing images in their shows. Some of the shows even look like they should be on Adult swim.
So much for "tomorrow's leaders..."
Another thing I found out that the show I'm now into, Young Justice, is going to be canceled on DC nation. One of the very VERY few shows that I considered to be human as in it teaches morals and doesn't go over the top in the humor section (seriously exactly how many Sponge Bob bathroom humor shows are there these days?) Both YJ and GLTAS (Green Lantern the Animated series) are going to be replaced with a dumb reboot of Teen Titans (that looks nothing like the original. Seriously it looks like a DC nation short still.) and Batman the animated series (which sucks because 1# why the hell is Alfred running around with guns? 2# How many Batman shows has there been for the past decade? 3# Where the hell is Robin and Batgirl? And why is Katana in this? 4# Katana's design looks freak'n crappy compared to her Brave and the bold designs. 5#why the hell does Batman have triangular head? And 6# Where is the Joker? The Penguin? Poison Ivy? Why do we have villains with pig masks and frog faces?)
To be honest the whole entire idea of introducing new shows to DC nation is a terrible idea due the fact that all Teen Titan fans have grown up now and YJ and GLTAS are extremely popular. I doubt Cartoon network even cares for their fans. A college friend of mine who is also a huge YJ and GLTAS fan had told me that Cartoon Network is competing with the Hub channel due to the fact that the Hub aims for little girls and Cartoon Network is now aiming for boys. Whats really sad is how many dumb shows Cartoon Network shows such as Half Naked animals, Gumball (which disturbs me beyond all levels) and other shows that are noneducational to even boys. I remembered during Christmas, my nieces and nephews were watching Adventure Time and as soon as I saw Ice king strip down, I told them to turn it off. Seriously? Are they really promoting disturbing images in their shows. Some of the shows even look like they should be on Adult swim.
So much for "tomorrow's leaders..."
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And I hope everyone got everything he or she asked for Christmas... I know I did.
So... I changed my style for digital art. I am now doing layering. I'd like it if anyone would critique my newest work. It would help me improve.
Link to work here: fav.me/d5pgf1a
So... I changed my style for digital art. I am now doing layering. I'd like it if anyone would critique my newest work. It would help me improve.
Link to work here: fav.me/d5pgf1a
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